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Evaluation 3. What have you learned from your audience feedback?
What have you
learned from your audience feedback?
The
audience feedback that we collected in were all generally pointing out the same
flaws in our trailer and they were that at some points the sound didn’t fit the
shot and that none of the trailer really made much sense.
When we
made the trailer we tried to make the storyline fairly hard to understand but
because it was nearly everybody that gave us feedback on this we most likely
made it too hard for people to understand. The original idea of this was to
make quite an obscure trailer showing almost a different story in each shot
which we hoped would get the audience interested and want to know how all of
these things are pieced together but if no one can really understand anything
that’s going on then no one will want to see it.
With the
sound when our group attempted this we tried to keep with the same obscure
theme of putting strange sound into our trailer. Everyone said that the sound
was good until one part where there was a babies laugh and when we watched it
back in front of everyone we all agreed that it didn't really fit the shot that
we put it on or maybe even the whole trailer.
If I could
do this again I would definitely try to have a more solid story line one that is
easily understandable but doesn't give a way too much. I wouldn't really change
the sound I think if I was to do this again I
believe that I would just need to put a little bit more of my time in to
finding what shots suit the sound effects.
I think that the sound is something that we will need to work on, maybe try out software like garage band and try to find more suiting sound clips to fit our trailer. I think that long droning sounds work well in horror trailers and that is why they are used in most horror trailers because they create suspense up until the montage of the trailer which is where the musics tempo is changed (normally made faster) until it reaches the end where it tends to fade out .
however there were a few pieces of positive feedback that we got from our audience. Most of it had to do with the locations that we filmed in and the cinematography of our trailer and i agree with them. i believe that we did take some time deciding what shots to use and where what locations to film them in which we have shown on our shot list. I believe that it is important to get the right shot because it tells people whats happening without any words being spoken, like our running shots you can tell someone is running away from the killer because the shot when its moving looks like someone is running with it and the previous shot showed the killer.
I think that the sound is something that we will need to work on, maybe try out software like garage band and try to find more suiting sound clips to fit our trailer. I think that long droning sounds work well in horror trailers and that is why they are used in most horror trailers because they create suspense up until the montage of the trailer which is where the musics tempo is changed (normally made faster) until it reaches the end where it tends to fade out .
however there were a few pieces of positive feedback that we got from our audience. Most of it had to do with the locations that we filmed in and the cinematography of our trailer and i agree with them. i believe that we did take some time deciding what shots to use and where what locations to film them in which we have shown on our shot list. I believe that it is important to get the right shot because it tells people whats happening without any words being spoken, like our running shots you can tell someone is running away from the killer because the shot when its moving looks like someone is running with it and the previous shot showed the killer.
Evaluation 2. How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?
How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?
I believe that my main product is effective in the way that it would draw people in to want to watch it due to our unknown story-line. When we created our trailer we did have a full idea for the piece but we wanted people to not really understand the concept of it to an extent so that they will want to go and see the full film. This trailer may not be as gripping and as powerful as we may have once wanted it to be but I do believe that our trailer does give a certain effect wanting to know what is going on within in the trailer and how all the different shots connect to each other.
When we filmed our trailer we had the shots of the computer, these shots were quite important for our full film idea as you may have guessed from the title ‘.Com.’ We also had the religious shots which shows the killers story to a certain extent and hopefully after watching this trailer people will want to see how these two things are connected and why the killer is doing what he does.My ancillary texts don’t really show anything to do with the story other than a part of the killers face however I still think that they both give off a strong effect. I used the same image for my poster and magazine cover, but I changed a few things to the image so they weren't the complete same, I did this because I believe that it was a strong image, an image that would get people to want to see the story behind this dark and gloomy picture.
I believe that the combination of my products do work together and also will want to make people want to see the film. I think that my ancillary texts will make my audience want to see the trailer, due to the obscurity of my main image, then will go on to watch our trailer and as I have previously wrote will want to see how the film will come together and what will all of the shots that were filmed end up resulting in.
When creating my ancillary texts i had this in mind, i wanted to keep the obscure theme of the trailer when i did my movie poster and my magazine cover. I can understand how this may not bring in much of an audience as i have found out from the student feedback that we have collected but i like the idea of not really knowing what is going on and keeping everyone wondering until the film is released.
More ways in which my ancillary texts and trailer are connected are that they both briefly show the killer. My poster and magazine cover both have a slightly distorted look on the image which happens to be the killer, you wouldn't be able to tell who it was if your saw them out in the street. My trailer also shows hidden shots of the killer where his hood is up and the shots we have with the killer in them have been either shot in a dark place or have been made darker in the editing stages after we made our trailer.
Evaluation 1. In what way does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products
In what way does
your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real
media products
The Story – The story of our trailer I
believe doesn’t and doesn’t follow the normal forms and conventions of media
products. I believe it does in the actual storyline where it is basically just
another slasher film on where a murderer goes around and kills teenagers. I
think that it differs from real media products in the way that the two
different sides to the story the religious views of the killer and the idea of
a horror film based on social networking, its like two different horror films
have been put together.
Music – The sound that we have used in
our trailer was normally long, held, low notes as well as the occasional creepy
sound of a baby laughing or a door opening and these I believe are all forms
and conventions of a similar media product
Editing – I think that the editing that we
done on the shots of our horror trailer are very similar to what you would see
on a real horror trailer there was plenty of fading, a slow motion scene, all
things that are present in current horror trailers. This has been done to help
the effect that the trailer has on the viewers.
Locations – The locations that we found I
believe would most definitely be used in any horror trailer with a similar
story line. The church and graveyard has been seen in many horror trailers for
years and the shots that we filmed in college would also be most likely seen in
a teen horror movie due to the concept of it. The grassy hilly area that we
filmed the running scenes on I also think would fit the forms and conventions
of a real horror trailer.
Characters – The use of character in our
trailer I believe is very stereotypical due to the use of gender. Our killer
was a male and throughout the whole trailer you never saw another male scared
or in distress. The only shots that we did which showed the murderer and a
victim at the same time, we used a female for the victim so this is definitely
a normal thing that you would see in horror trailers.
Costume/Props – The costume that we used for the
killer was just a few plain pieces of clothing that we could find as well as
the wellington boots and the upturned hood. We did this to try and make him
look like a serious character and keep the attention of what he is wearing
rather then what he is here to do. The prop we gave this character was a
cricket bat, a very typical weapon for a horror film killer. The use of fake
blood is also a must have on a horror trailer so we went with the normal forms
and conventions on this one aswell.
Monday, 15 April 2013
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